The best compensation

The best compensation

A Poem by Nida Lodi
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I wrote this poem in extreme conditions when i was going through the most poignant experience of my life.I felt blistered and completely banged up and i had no other option to pour out my heart.

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Why the emptiness in me is deepening
Why being without you is so struckening
Was it just a dream or a reality..
that until now.. you were here besides me
If it was real then why i m still troubling and  struggling for an escape
You can see in my heart the bites of darkness having a huge gape
You promised me you will always be there to wipe my tears
Then why i m standing alone on this  road with lots of fears
If you were really an angel...then why don't you come to control my heart’s pace
Why don't you come and assure me if its  just a nightmare or a reality to face
Why  every wound of my past is unfolding now
Getting more worsened as if someone's pricking a bow
I wanted to move ahead with you till eternity...and i needed ur shove
But now i doubt if it was really your love or you just COMPENSATED my love????

© 2011 Nida Lodi


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gud one

Posted 13 Years Ago


this is really beautiful ♥ :)
I would really like to read more ^_^


Posted 13 Years Ago


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Nida Lodi
Nida Lodi

Jodhpur, India



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