Kevin

I let you in,

You saw all there was to see.

I thought i could trust you,

I gave you all of me.

 

But now i see,

You cannot truely love,

You are damaged beyond repair.

 

To make yourself feel whole,

You made me feel less.

 

But looking back now

You are the one who will hurt forever

And always compare those girls to me.

 

You may have broken my heart

But I've moved on,

And I'll forever be the one that got away

Reviews

[The Perfectionist]

There's no E in "truly". It's a funny word.

This is a classic moving on poem. It's well done but there's really nothing special here. You've adequately said what you wanted to say and you got your message across. No fancy metaphors; just straight talk. Kind of refreshing actually. And it flowed, mostly, so that's a bonus.