Stay with me.

Stay with me.

A Poem by .nicole.

Sweet, caring, kind.

But can all of that change?

I know you loved her.

But now it seems you love me.

Could it change?

Could you go back to her?

Please don't.

You are my everything.

You make me smile when I want to cry.

You can make everything better with just a few words.

Don't change things now.

I'm begging you.

You don't know how I need you.

You make everything okay.

Don't go back.

Stay with me.

© 2009 .nicole.


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In the twisted emotion of love we can get lost in passion and desire. I like the poem. Desire is powerful in your words. I believe we take no chances. Won't know no pleasure. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


Awe so sweet,very nice.

Posted 15 Years Ago


I wonder if she stole him away and fears karma. Another part of me sees her as a victim. Perhaps this
old flame returns to keep her from being happy. This is an honest look on what is on the inside. It takes
courage to write something as truthful as this. This writing will make you a stronger individual, whether
it is fiction or not.

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is a lovely poem, very sad. Do you need to feel this way?





Posted 15 Years Ago


Such an emotional, heartfelt plea!
I hope all works out for you.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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