Because Of You.

Because Of You.

A Poem by .nicole.

You say you know who i feel,

Hurt, and Broken, and Lost

But some how I doubt that.

I hurt more than you know.

And it's all because of you.

Because you had to be so,

Sweet, and Funny, and Loving.

I fell in love with you.

But I know you don't feel the same

And I understand that we could never be.

So just let me cry and scream and shout.

Because it's not something i could hold in.

My heart can't be fixed with your smile and laugh and hugs.

It takes time to heal a wound so deep.

So just go away for awhile and let me be.

I need time to think.

But trust me on this one,

I know you will always be there.

And I need you now,

But in a different way.

I need you far away.

© 2009 .nicole.


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An unfamiliar twist on a familiar story. I went and landed myself in this exact situation, and it's not pleasant to be on the other end either. But enough about me, back to the poem. You lose points with me (as always) for a couple of misspellings, but that can be mostly forgiven with the excellent way the rest of this poem is written. A lot of people that I've seen have issues ending things, but this is ended perfectly. In fact...no, I won't say that here, I'll message you. Well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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