You Are...(Age 17)

You are the thought that starts each morning,

The conclusion to each day,

You are in all that I do,

and everything I say.

 

You are the smile on my face,

The twinkle in my eye,

The warmth inside my heart,

The fullness in my life.

 

You are the hand that's laced in mine,

And the coat upon my back,

And when your not around,

You're like the vitimans that I lack.

 

You are my silly, mature, caring,

Thoughtful, bright and honest guy,

The one who holds me tightly,

When I feel I want to cry.

 

You are the dimple in my cheek,

The ever-constant tingle in my soul,

The voice that makes me weak,

The only one who makes me whole.

 

You are all I've ever wanted,

You are all I'll ever need,

You are all I've ever dreamed of,

You are all of this to me.

Reviews

[Muse]

You are the dimple in my cheek,
The ever-constant tingle in my soul,

What a lighthearted read! I loved this!

Welcome to WC.

[Setting Sun]

I'm in love with this poem

[Wicked Jester]

Very nice....I really enjoy the line "your are the hand thats laced in mine" it's so discriptive and very sweet!

[AmandaN]

Ahh I liked this a lot , light hearted but meaningful, clever words but simple form,fab.

[fireblossom]

A very good poem. I read it with an Irish accent and found that it helped me feel it more deeply. You have the true poet heart.

[Reverent]

So charming! So genuine.