You Are...(Age 17)

You are the thought that starts each morning,

The conclusion to each day,

You are in all that I do,

and everything I say.

 

You are the smile on my face,

The twinkle in my eye,

The warmth inside my heart,

The fullness in my life.

 

You are the hand that's laced in mine,

And the coat upon my back,

And when your not around,

You're like the vitimans that I lack.

 

You are my silly, mature, caring,

Thoughtful, bright and honest guy,

The one who holds me tightly,

When I feel I want to cry.

 

You are the dimple in my cheek,

The ever-constant tingle in my soul,

The voice that makes me weak,

The only one who makes me whole.

 

You are all I've ever wanted,

You are all I'll ever need,

You are all I've ever dreamed of,

You are all of this to me.

Reviews

[Abhijeet Kumar]

Oh! Wow.. This is quite amazing and full of glory of love. I like here some new sentiments of love, you are amazing writer.

[Cassie Black]

Awh this is so sweet! Really heart warming

[Mermaidstear]

Excellent job ! Made me miss my boyfriend :)

[BlackRose]

It's a really nice poem. I write like this too. The song I wrote I thought was strong enough, the one you read. I didn't want it to have those kinds of strong words with this one that wouldn't suit or be right for that one. I have other songs (or poems) that may sound a bit poetic or stronger in the words. I'm sure you will like those better (a couple of them I will put up real soon).

[❀ Gabriela ..]

This is so sweet!! Really excellent poem :)

[I Shred This Cabbage]

Nice write :) when I feel I want to cry suggests a hidden strength or perhaps reserve. Good job

[lebana]

nice poem,