Waiting for You

This is actually the lyrics to a song I wrote recently. Any thoughts or feedback is always welcomed and appreciated.

I don't agree why I had to choose,
Between you and me, Baby had nothing to prove,
I couldn't see, why i'd need you still,
Childish games, your deceit, all just driving me ill.

But I've waited all along.
I'm still waiting here in this empty house.
Praying baby come along, and lend me your skin,
So I might be with you.

But now in my sleep, it all disappears,
The painful memories, it drives away all my fears.
Yet I pray for the day, I see you knocking around,
Take away all the pain of your s**t dragging me down.

Cause I've waited all along.
I'm still waiting here in this empty house.
Praying baby come along, and lend me your skin,
So I might be with you.

But deep in my heart, I know it's not real,
Cause you failed to see, why I loved you still.
Was leaving me all a part of your game,
Left here to bleed,
Or just go insane.

Author's Note

This is the lyrics of a new song I wrote. All feedback welcome.

Reviews

[Just Kim]

Wow! This is really good, I enjoyed this, would like to hear it sung. Off and on I write songs as well

[Silent_Whispers]

Thanks Kim! I started a YouTube Channel a while back, just posting my own acoustic covers of different songs on guitar every so often. Hopefully will find the confidence some day to post my originals.