Hurricane

This poem seek to show how unstable one emotions is and how love can calm that spirit.

My emotions are like a hurricane

I start off quite harsh and windy; feisty to all that dear speak to me

I blow over anyone or anything that dares stand in my way

My emotions feel like a hurricane…

 

Just like a hurricane

All that raging must come to an end

At least for a while...

You will see the calm within my emotions, just like a hurricane

 

Only for a short while that is…

For my subdued angry and rage

Will return at full force…

Unless I shall meet upon my greatest fear

 

Only the warm embrace of his love

Shall be able to calm my fierce emotions

Only his willingness to subdue me and persistence

Shall dissipate my anger and let me be free to love again

 

Nicola Saunders (02/11/13 @ 4.00am)

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Lucien Maier]

good word choice, it is a good emotional outlet. There is a great longing through out the piece that comes out well.