Eternal Thirst

The hunger of a nightwalker

Masquerading in human flesh

I stalk you into the night

this exhilaration is unbearable

feed me

your innocence is luscious

life’s blood scalding

I consume you

and yet this eternal thirst

is never sated

I am damned 

     

 

Reviews

[Caradoc]

This is just my kind of piece. I love the title, when you dropped it in the piece itself, and the descriptions you use for the first person point of view. You have an excellent vampiric narrator here. You also get extra points for using the word "masquerading", as it connected my mind instantly to the genre defining work of White Wolf.

Another one to be added to my favorites.

Well done.

-Caradoc

[Nicole Williams]

I'm honored that you enjoyed my poem, this was one of my favorites to write. Thank you so much for you kind words and review.

[Caradoc]

You're very welcome. Thank you for sharing this with the WC community.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Wow! Very nice poem......each word speaks in resonance with your theme......i really liked it! Great write!

[Nicole Williams]

thank you so much!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

You are welcome!

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

This spoke to the child of the night in me. Well done!

[Nicole Williams]

thank youuuu~