In My Nightmare

In My Nightmare

A Poem by Nicole Williams

I can see them

watching and waiting

getting ready to pounce

I run but I’m not fast enough

can’t fight the monsters anymore

they overpower me and I’m helpless

I scream but no one hears me

it’s like a circle of pain

over and over and over again

they strip me of my pride

when they’re done with me

all that’s left is a broken puppet

a shell of a person

nothing but debris

© 2013 Nicole Williams


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Once again girl a very well written poem... And once again my kind of poem... I love the dark side of poetry... Where we as writers can unleash the horror, the demons of hell... We as humans all possess monsters/demons... They hide in our closet at night just so people can't see how screwed up we really are... This is another one I really wish I would have written... I really love the line "All that's left is a broken puppet."

This is the type of poem that will send shivers right down your spine... But for so many of us this poem is true going back to what I said above... The demons that possess us become to strong to fight off after so long and you just let them become a part of you... And in the end I really do believe nothing is left of you but the shell of what you used to be... Can't wait to read more of your work...

Posted 11 Years Ago


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when they’re done with me

all that’s left is a broken puppet

a shell of a person

nothing but debris

awesome poem! well written


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicole Williams

11 Years Ago

thank you so much! :)
costa siwale

11 Years Ago

with poems like this , you are welcome
"I scream but no one hears me



it’s like a circle of pain



over and over and over again"

When you are stripped of your pride you feel the ebb and tide...Bravo.............




they strip me of my pride


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is indeed felt nightmarish, you conveyed a frantic feel from start to finish. Well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The perfect feel of fear, so well described here. Claustrophobic, awareness almost... stuck, and alone, a black hole of angst. Wonderful piece, I like your dark raw writings.

- Elisa

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicole Williams

11 Years Ago

thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it :)

11 Years Ago

I really do.... will check more of you within the time, :) you're very welcome! x
I found this poem quite beautiful. Dark, ominous, and scary, but beautiful none the less :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicole Williams

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much :) ill be sure to check out your work as well
Rose Diamond

11 Years Ago

Thanks! I really appreciate that. :)
An astute recitation... Realism, dark and gripping. Good job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can see that this was written with a lot of meaning from deep inside. I feel everyone has dark and powerful nightmares. Great work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicole Williams

11 Years Ago

thank you ^___^
Kora, I felt this was written from the heart, it reads dark and powerful, I hope you have good dreams too.
Will
P.s My Daughter's name is Kora as well-so I will be taking an interest in your work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicole Williams

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much and I'm happy you liked it :)
I wish I had more nightmares love the frills and scares :) good work and good flow :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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