Cracked perception

just something i made up. i hope you enjoy it :)

You are just a fixture upon the wall 

What makes you think you know it all?

Telling us who is the prettiest gal 

Well, I say what do you know pal?

Just a craked reflection

A mirrored image of your former self

You never had any good intentions

Is that something you forgot to mention?

Telling one girl she isnt pretty enough

Saying to one guy "your not so tough"

Think your all powerful because you have a face

Really you are just an empty space

Mirror, Mirror on the wall 

Do you think you have it all?

Mirror. Mirror on the wall

Who now is the fairest of them all?

Is it Bell,Ariel,or Snow White?

The Beast, Gaston,or Prince John?

Mirror, Mirror on the wall 

Can you really see at all? 

Reviews

[SeventhSin]

This is an amazing poem! :) Really, really liked this!!!!!!! Awesome job!

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

"Mirror, mirror on the wall
Can you really see at all?"

I loved this couplet. A great ending for an outstanding poem. Nice job!

Timely, (with the new Snow White movie release), and a creative twist on an old theme. I like that you also included the male side of mirror gazing.

[Coyote Poetry]

When we take a real hard look into the mirror. Easy to see weaknesses. I like the questions and the desire of the poem.
"Mirror, Mirror on the wall
Can you really see at all? "
Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[EMMIE]

Awesome! Very creative, unique and very well composed!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

this provokes so much self-esteem and self-confidence! mirrors and appearances don't need to make us feel bad at all

thanks for sharing

[Lokesh]

A good one.
-Lokesh

[Starr Mist]

I loved this! It is so true in real life, what makes a girl to one guy is different for another guy.

Thanks for posting this! :)

-Starr Mist

[Revery]

This uses imagery that seems simple and juvenile but not only touches on but does a great job, a deeper more serious issue/dilemma. Of large egos. This is written very clever and has far more complexity than first glance would suggest. Great job