As the music plays

As the music plays

A Poem by MandaBear
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I was looking at this picture for a contest and this is what it inspired :) Hope you like it

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A symphony of classical proportions took place
Like a melody composed for a song 
Two souls intertwined to a masterpiece 
Like harmony finding its melody
The conductor begins his anthem on the sweetest note
Orchestrating the rhythm with flawless precision
As the air fills with desire and yearning 
The tempo gets quicker and quicker
Like a play with ever growing plot 
The music is finding its sound 
Trying different tones to master its art 
Tweaking its final product to achieve greatness
The instruments have hit perfection 
The sounds are marvelous, stunning even
Nothing can compare to the outreaching resonance
Every melody,lyric,and note brilliantly working as one
As our musical endeavor draws to a close
We find the conductor marvel at this stroke of genius 
Knowing  the composition has the perfect ending 
This masterpiece will be remembered forever 
The music shall go on.....

© 2012 MandaBear


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Wow,
An amazing piece of art we have here...
Well done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like this. like the music allegory.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I'm saying just one word: Tango.
Your description, even the flow of the piece ... the image also, made me think of a well-played tango.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow! a stuning piece. Thank you

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is so beautiful! I felt like, this is how I try to use my voice when I sing the songs that are on the radio, or that I ask permission to use someones lyrics and find a song on youtube and I record it!

Very good again! I loved it! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


reminds me of a musical play..amazing write..

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow, this is great! I love how you used so many different musical metaphors. Great job! :-)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Exceptional in it's harmonious and gentle meaning!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


such a unique metaphor you've created here!

and the last two stanzas made me feel so good on the inside

and music can be quite a lovable thing for many people

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on June 4, 2012
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