Longing for a friend

Longing for a friend

A Poem by MandaBear
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Just something i wrote because I miss my friend that moves away very much!! Hope you like it :)

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I miss you 
I miss the way you made me laugh
I miss the way we made jokes 
I miss you so much

I wish you would come back
I wish I could get my big sister back
I wish I could see your smiling face
I wish I could feel your warm embrace

I want you to be happy
I want you to have a good life
I want you to thinking of me at least sometimes 
I want you to know I think of you all the time

If only you knew how much you mean to me
If only you knew you were my best friend in the world
If only you knew how truly special you are 
If only you knew you could see 

I miss you, I wish I could see you, I want to make sure your happy, If only you knew how much I need you my friend. 

© 2013 MandaBear


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Now that's poetry, my friend !!! I see pathos, i see great feelings very well caught in these stanzas =D Can't even list all the amazing figures of speech you used here =D
Just amazing, gonna add it to my favourites :)
Keep writing this way =D =D

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is sweet, and I know how this feels.
I moved schools in the 6th grade. I miss my old friends sometimes :(
Great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Touching

Posted 12 Years Ago


Aw...That is really sweet...That feeling when I'm missing my friend as well...Great and sweet poem, Amanda!
:)))

Posted 12 Years Ago


Aw, this is cute. If you miss your friend this much, then she's sure to know how much you need her! Well done, this is a very good poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on April 24, 2012
Last Updated on June 27, 2013
Tags: missing, longing, wanting, needing, friend, move, poem, poetry


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