Wave of Murder

someone doesn't make it out alive

As you lay fighting for your life

You scream your plight

Trying to get away with all your might

There was going to be a murder tonight.

Your captor has many plans for you

He told you; you would be his slave

No clothes, No  way to get out, No way to stop him

You felt your body go limp.

He ties you to his bed

chains and ropes bound your hands and feet

He gets on top of you as though you are his treat

For this deadly fate he must meet

As time goes by he becomes rougher 

You can't imagine a worse kind of torture

As he forced you to say dirty things

He forced you to participate in this filthy games

He was finally done with you

You sighed in relief 

But all was not over you soon realized 

He pulled out a whip

You screamed 

"Please stop or just go ahead and kill me"

He responded 

"It wouldn't be any fun for me"

You just had enough you had to get out of there

But how? How do you get away when you're tied up?

You wait for him to leave the room

You try to slip out of the ropes

You get one hand out and work on the other one fast

Next your legs and you are now free

You must act quickly though

You find a knife you see

Running in the next room 

You come at him with a powerful zoom

Cut deep into his throat 

Watching all his blood float

With the wave of your hand

You wrote in this chest

A message in this man

"MURDER"

The wicked witch is dead

You survived with all the hairs on your head.

Finally your captor is dead

Author's Note

Okay I fixed all the errors :) so tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

the captor seems to be described accurately...

[Pikachu]

Great write, what intensity! Realltallkk(:

[Luciole]

Oh wow! This was amazing! Really great emotion and story telling and it had a great intensity :)

[外人 (Gaiji..]

wow, a very strong and bloody story .... didn't know this part of you xD
what i really enjoyed was the fact you used the second person "you" instead of "i" making us feel like we're the protagonists :)

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Very intense, but I enjoyed it. A very entertaining poem.

[Lokesh]

Why don't you write a story than using plot in poem?
-Swargasmith

[Angelic Surrender]

Wow... I'm kinda speachless here. This is an amazing write. Very powerful. Fighting against those who would rape and murder us and triumphing. The female character in this poem is very brave. I admire here courage in the face of such a danger. I really really liked this. Very inspirational

[Cassie Fraga]

oooooowwweeeeee... DARK... AND THE INTENSE OOOOZES THROUGH THESE LINES PERFECTLY!!! GREAT WRITE!!!
**tips my lyrical wand to you**

[BikerAngie]

excellent!! sorry have not been online