Message in a bottle

I saw a quote on someones profile so i turned it into a poem :) Hope you like it :)

Sounds of waves crashing against the shore

Only to recede and start all over again

Sometimes calming, Sometimes rough

It all ends the same; crashing at the shore

Seems as though not much goes on

Just crashing all day and night long

Oh, wait there is something in the water

I wonder what it could be?

As the waves draw the object closer 

The awe becomes ever greater

What could it be? Where has it come from?

Who sent it out into the void of the ocean?

Finally the object is close enough to reach

The anticipation comes to a halt

I bent down and grad the object

Only to find it is a bottle but no ordinary bottle.

No this bottle contained a message inside

Oh, what wisdom's does this treasure hold?

Perhaps a secret? Maybe a map?

Only one way to find out.

I opened the bottle removing the cork

I reached inside for the paper within

Opened the paper and read the message

After reading the message I put the paper back 

And put the bottle back in the ocean

Wondering next where the bottle may end up

I bet your wondering what secret the bottle held?

Well the message was simple.........

If you dont understand my silence, how will you understand my words?

 

Reviews

[Missy Moooooo]

Wow. That's powerful

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the story in this poem and the very good ending.
"If you dont understand my silence, how will you understand my words?"
There was wise words in the bottle. Thank you for the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Bryan Micheni]

i like he cohesion in this piece... awesome write

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

nice story you've created here!

and good pick of your quote too

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

A very pretty and interesting poem! Kept me interested from start to finish.

[Bidu Ibrahim]

I love the way it ends. A brilliant piece indeed! Good job

[T. Michele Smock]

nice

[WhiteWillow]

Great idea for a poem! The whole piece has a wonderful flow to it, which goes hand in hand with the subject. A wonderful write!

[外人 (Gaiji..]

AMANDA'S BACK !!!!! =D =D =D
That's exactly the outcome for such a poem that only you could make !!
You killed me with the last verse ... so Amandy !! xD

[ba_mcfarlane]

Finished like a winner pulling away...good job