The Shadow for me

I just wrote it after i looked up a prompt. i was bored and this is what i came up with

You keep following me, 

No matter where I go. 

Your always there, 

I can't get rid of you.

You're behind me, 

You're in front of me.

I only see you when the light is right.

Otherwise you fade away in the darkness.

If only I knew more about you,

Then maybe we could be friends.

If only I could see you more.

Then maybe we could be.

You keep following me, 

No matter where I go.

Your always there,

I don't want to get rid of you.

Without you my world would be sad

I couldn't say you were there my shadow.

I hope the light hits you just right

So you always be in my sight.

Reviews

[Missy Moooooo]

Creepy

[Rika]

Liked the feel of it, kinda creepy and very deep.

[Jon Roggie]

I like it. I feel the best way to create is from you have recently experienced.

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Great poem! I like how you worked with this topic, it's very interesting.

[BikerAngie]

YES I FELT IT WAS ABOUT SELF DISCOVERY! I COULD RELATE FROM THAT LEVEL ON IT.

[Calypso]

I'd like to say you're talking about a person, but I'm going to be more creative and say that you're talking about emotions. At least that's what I though.

[T. Michele Smock]

very nice

[外人 (Gaiji..]

amazing poem, i really liked it =D Interesting theme and interesting point of view about it, i love when poetry makes us (just the way it should) look at things in different ways and you did it with this poem ;)
So again: great poem, great piece =D

[Coyote Poetry]

The shadows will follow us. I like the way you described how the shadow changes direction and is needed. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Lokesh]

Are you talking about the actual shadow or someone who is your great helper? And how can shadow make your world happy? There is some grammatical mistake in the third line of the first stanza. An apostrophe is missing. Any way not the good one of yours.
-Swargasmith