Wheels keep turning

This is my take on a View point if a shopping cart. Love or hate??

Sparkle, Sparkle, Shine.....

I'm brand new, 

Never been used, 

Waiting to be picked,

Everyone's going to fill me up.

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Oh, this is my first day,

I am geared up and ready to roll.

 My first ride is coming; Oh joy!

She grabs me with such soft hands;

Such a smooth drive.

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She picks up a lovely shirt

I know she would look great in it.

She picks up another shirt 

I hope she buys that one.

Oh, i'm having such a good time.

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Our trips takes us all around. 

I had such a great day!

I hope tomorrow is the same.

Putting her items on the counter,

Pays for them and leaves me.

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Tomorrow has come and gone.

My sparkle and shine has turned to rust.

I have been beat up and left in the aisle.

Wheels broken and the same routine everyday.

I wish I could feel those soft hands again.

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I guess my time is done.

I have come to the wheel end.

Time now to reflect on the memories, 

Of my first ride and those soft hands.

Sparkle, Sparkle, Shine. 

Reviews

[Indie Skreet]

I am a little lost as to why this is humorous. Call me English or summat! I don't want to be mean, but the rhythm of this needs addressing and just made more funny. I hope my honesty isn't hurtful and I realise by the other reviews you have received that others may not agree with me. I wish you the best of luck, warm regards Indie

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

This was amazing! I loved it =^v^=

[Coyote Poetry]

I guess carts do have a life span too. I like the way you gave life to the cart. Thank you for the entertaining poem.
Coyote

[Vivere ad mihi, mi Deus]

Wow, i got all happy and exited at first, now im kinda sad lol. guess you can relate this to life too, well done i like it :)

[BikerAngie]

IT SORTA REMINDS ME OF MY LIFE ONCE BRIGHT AND FULL OF HOPE AND PROMISES THEN LATTER IN LIFE BROKEN AND FEELING USED

[Calypso]

:)

[T. Michele Smock]

very touching i like it

[Lokesh]

A touching poem. Should there be 'beaten' in the place of 'beat' in the third line of the fifth stanza?
-Swargasmith

[Cassie Fraga]

hahahahaha!!! now this is talent at its best!! SIS to take a simple everyday tool and put its usage into poetic term... that is BRILLIANT!!! luv ya!!!

[Sophie]

Cute, I really liked it! Great write.