Wheels keep turning

Wheels keep turning

A Poem by MandaBear
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This is my take on a View point if a shopping cart. Love or hate??

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Sparkle, Sparkle, Shine.....

I'm brand new, 

Never been used, 

Waiting to be picked,

Everyone's going to fill me up.

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Oh, this is my first day,

I am geared up and ready to roll.

 My first ride is coming; Oh joy!

She grabs me with such soft hands;

Such a smooth drive.

...............................................................................................

She picks up a lovely shirt

I know she would look great in it.

She picks up another shirt 

I hope she buys that one.

Oh, i'm having such a good time.

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Our trips takes us all around. 

I had such a great day!

I hope tomorrow is the same.

Putting her items on the counter,

Pays for them and leaves me.
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Tomorrow has come and gone.

My sparkle and shine has turned to rust.

I have been beat up and left in the aisle.

Wheels broken and the same routine everyday.

I wish I could feel those soft hands again.
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I guess my time is done.

I have come to the wheel end.

Time now to reflect on the memories, 

Of my first ride and those soft hands.

Sparkle, Sparkle, Shine. 

© 2013 MandaBear


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I am a little lost as to why this is humorous. Call me English or summat! I don't want to be mean, but the rhythm of this needs addressing and just made more funny. I hope my honesty isn't hurtful and I realise by the other reviews you have received that others may not agree with me. I wish you the best of luck, warm regards Indie

Posted 11 Years Ago


This was amazing! I loved it =^v^=

Posted 12 Years Ago


I guess carts do have a life span too. I like the way you gave life to the cart. Thank you for the entertaining poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow, i got all happy and exited at first, now im kinda sad lol. guess you can relate this to life too, well done i like it :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


IT SORTA REMINDS ME OF MY LIFE ONCE BRIGHT AND FULL OF HOPE AND PROMISES THEN LATTER IN LIFE BROKEN AND FEELING USED

Posted 12 Years Ago


:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


very touching i like it

Posted 12 Years Ago


A touching poem. Should there be 'beaten' in the place of 'beat' in the third line of the fifth stanza?
-Swargasmith

Posted 12 Years Ago


hahahahaha!!! now this is talent at its best!! SIS to take a simple everyday tool and put its usage into poetic term... that is BRILLIANT!!! luv ya!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Cute, I really liked it! Great write.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on April 12, 2012
Last Updated on June 27, 2013
Tags: wheels, new, wanted, used, fun, happy, poem, poetry


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