Twinkle, Twinkle Little Fairy

Just something i thought of. One of my friends like fairies so i wrote this :) Love or Hate??

Twinkle, Twinkle Little Fairy wings.

Oh, how big and full are thee.

Your so beautiful when you fly.

I wish I was a fairy. 

Twinkle, Twinkle Little Fairy dreams.

Dancing like little balls of light in my head.

Your so graceful when you dance.

I wish I knew your dance.

Twinkle, Twinkle Little Fairy gleam.

How bright and colorful are you.

Red, Purple, Blue and Green.

Such a power to be seen.

Twinkle, Twinkle Little Fairy team.

I want to be like one of you.

How can I be a fairy just like you?

Will I ever be a fairy?

Twinkle Twinkle my little fairy for one day I will be a fairy like you 

I will be able to fly in the sky 

Be in your dreams with all my fairy gleam.

I will one day be on your colorful team.

Reviews

[The White Wolf]

This is sweet! I adore fae. Thank you for the smile :)

[Cassie Fraga]

I wanna be a fairy!!!! hahaha..... this was a fun read!! great job!!

[T. Michele Smock]

CUTE

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Cute write, and very creative. Nicely done!

[Thea]

Aw...This is somewhat cute...The idea is creative too...I like it...I wish fairies were real! XD
Heehee...Nice poem!
:)))

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Loved it !! =D
Well, i guess i can say you've just written a ballad :) :
every stanza contains the repetition of a verse with very small differences (a single word !!) and it kinda have a nice flow =D The flow makes me think of fairies flying so you definitely did an amazing job with this poem :)
Last thing: "thee"? YOU KILLED ME WITH THAT ! you know how much i love the use of arcaic words (especially the ones you can find in Shakespeare's sonnets like this one) =D =D =D =D
Giving you only 100/100 because they don't let me give you more :(