Twinkle, Twinkle Little Fairy

Just something i thought of. One of my friends like fairies so i wrote this :) Love or Hate??

Twinkle, Twinkle Little Fairy wings.

Oh, how big and full are thee.

Your so beautiful when you fly.

I wish I was a fairy. 

Twinkle, Twinkle Little Fairy dreams.

Dancing like little balls of light in my head.

Your so graceful when you dance.

I wish I knew your dance.

Twinkle, Twinkle Little Fairy gleam.

How bright and colorful are you.

Red, Purple, Blue and Green.

Such a power to be seen.

Twinkle, Twinkle Little Fairy team.

I want to be like one of you.

How can I be a fairy just like you?

Will I ever be a fairy?

Twinkle Twinkle my little fairy for one day I will be a fairy like you 

I will be able to fly in the sky 

Be in your dreams with all my fairy gleam.

I will one day be on your colorful team.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice twist on a old story for children. I like the repetition gave strength to the desire of this poem. I like your ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Sophie]

This is really sweet ;) great job!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

nice poem, but i think you should make this line be a bit shorter:
"Twinkle Twinkle my little fairy for one day I will be a fairy like you "

[Vivere ad mihi, mi Deus]

It was nice, I am not very fond of fairies, but this is cute.

[Lily Mae]

The fairy realm will be smiling with this one..xo Very well written for the little ones..xo

[Sunflower]

wonderful poem, i really like it

[ღ.яαg..]

LoL I love it xD I used to wish I was fairy, but then I read Holly Black's Tithe and changed my mind back to wanting to be a hermit. Yeah, I'm weird but your poem's not!!! Good job ;D

[BikerAngie]

Adorable read It truly made me smile

[SuicidePact.]

I liked it, great write!

but i had twinkle twinkle little star stuck in my head !

[Angelic Surrender]

This is cut ^_^ nice job