Inner Thoughts....

I did this for a prompt. Like when a girl likes two guys at the same time and wants both but has to choose like a love triangle. I hope it comes across that way!! Love or hate?? Let me know!

I love you... 

No wait I love him...

No that's still not right...

I love you both.

Oh, I wish i could make up my mind.

You both are so amazing.
One is so romantic

The other is adventurous.

Which should I choose?

Romantic or Adventurous?

Why? Oh why? Must I pick?

Why can't I have both?

I love you... 

No wait I love him...

No that's still not right...

I love you both.

My torrid love affair has to end.

I will hurt one of you.

Yet, that's not what I want.

What should I do?

Oh, What a triangle to be in!

I must set them both free

I cannot let them suffer

All because of me.

So I set you free...

I still love you...

No wait I still love him..

Oh, I'll never get it right.

I still love them both.....

Reviews

[kadian fraser]

Congrats> this poems is very realistic and filled of intense feelings> keep up the good work

[Anexi]

I've been in something like this it's a horrible feeling. This was really good.

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Ohymygosh, this is so amazing! I have been in this situation before once or twice. :) Well done

[Archia]

Oh what a predicament. You really expressed that well, and the emotions related to this also. I like how the end, that the problem isn't completely resolved as the confusion is still there. Nice job.

[Wendy Seames Garner]

A little indecisive here, but I see the three. I've never had a problem like this, always knew who I loved.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

"I must set them both free
I cannot let them suffer
All because of me.
So I set you free..."

so meaningful and caring...

[Vivere ad mihi, mi Deus]

Love triangles suck. And you have done a great job of portraying that :) Well done!!

[Angelic Surrender]

Great work portraying the inner struggle of one who loves two. It is a very difficult situation to be in. I like it. good work

[ღ.яαg..]

LoL ah, great job! My favorite part is where you say you have to hurt one of them... that part made me laugh so much. Anyways, I love this work!!!

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Ah, love triangles. Great job with this poem, I enjoyed reading it. :-)