Sweetest Kiss

I saw a contest and it said to write a date from the pov for the boy so here is my take on it. Hope you like it.

A sweet kiss to end what was a perfect night.

She, I feel is the one that i want to call mine.

My heart is pounding with the joy I feel.

She is perfect and no one can compare.

Our date started like any other.

I was sweating like a pig waiting for her.

She came down the steps like an angel.

I felt as though we were the only ones in the room.

Clearing my breath finally I said something.

You look simply amazing.

She let out a little giggle and an heart stopping smile.

So off we went to your date.

A simple candle light dinner

Endless chatter and laughs galore.

I thought to my self 

She looks magnificent in this light.

I couldn't keep my eyes off of her.

We finished our dinner and walked to the car.

She said she loved the dinner.

I let out a smile and a happy feeling came over.

I told her I had a surprise for her.

She looked up and wondered what it could be.

We arrived in a field and laid out was a blanket 

We walked over and watched the stars.

Talking and talking we almost lost track of time.

I took her home and opened her door.

Now is the moment of truth 

Will I get that good night kiss?

She leans in and.......

A sweet kiss to end what was a perfect night.

She, I feel is the one that i want to call mine.

My heart is pounding with the joy I feel.

She is perfect and no one can compare.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Those sweet kisses are what we remember in old age. I like the emotion and excitement in this poem. A very nice ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[外人 (Gaiji..]

I loved the fact you accepted the challenge and you mastered it so well !
Again I loved the use of quatrains ! Just feeling there's something missing ... your signature (the final verse, resuming everything) !!
Good poem, good job =D

[Vivere ad mihi, mi Deus]

I love how the first and last stanza are the same, a wonderful end to a romantic date!!

[The White Wolf]

Well, you did a great job! Let us hope there is a guy out there that has these beautiful feelings when they are on a date with a girl :) Nicely done, my friend.

[Sophie]

Brilliant. It's really romantic, and I think a lot of people find romance writing hard, especially for poems, but you did it amazingly. Well done.