Figured it out...

a couple who are getting married and there souls are fighting inside themselves. Like say one thing but really mean another. ps. I used Nickelback lyrics to help convey their thoughts. Love or hate??

As you walk down the aisle 

People are staring at you.

Your soon to be husband is waiting.

Closer and closer you get to changing your life.

Finally there at the alter 

Ready to say your vows

As you look at your partner 

You begin reading...

From the first day I met you

(First day I figured you out)

I wanted to be with you 

(Now I know what you are)

Know somehow I loved you

(I loved how you passed the check)

When you told me you wanted to spend every minute with me

( You liked my pants on the floor and the dirt on my knees)

Wasn't hard to see that you were the guy for me

(It wasn't hard to figure you out and now you wonder why)

I love you my baby 

(I love the good times you wrecked)

Your inner soul was fighting with you

But you didn't heed the warning.

Now he reads his vows

To his soon to be wife.

Baby I love you for you.

(I love your lack of self respect)

I want to hold you forever.

(I like the way you still say please)

Your the girl for me 

(You're like my favorite disease)

I love you more than you know

(I love the way you can't say no)

I love how you are and what you will become

(I like the white stains on your dress)

For you I give my heart and soul

( It wasn't that hard to figure you out)

Now you are married

The perfect couple

And you think you have

Figured it out.....

Reviews

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

this is a unique poem!

love the parentheses

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Well done :)

[Angelic Surrender]

Nice. This is awesome :) Great work

[Coyote Poetry]

The honesty of these words are amazing. Would be a better world if we were more honest and direct. I like the real statements under the pretend one's of real life. No weakness in this outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Aka_Kitsune]

love, definitely not hate, wow great job it is very interesting, and unique

[SuicidePact.]

wow, this was unique but totally cool!

loved the diff colors, loved basically the whole thing.


its funny how sometimes people look like the prefect ppicture but inside its completely different

[BikerAngie]

Bravo

[外人 (Gaiji..]

singular scene as only you can make up, great read, great story, keep it up :)

[Vivere ad mihi, mi Deus]

Really nice, made me smile. great write!!