My Precious Love letter

just something i came up with :) I was inspired by one of my friends on here. After reading her poem I had to write this :) So thanks SuicidePact :)

Shall I compare thee to a summers day?

Shall I compare thee to any day?

I bequeath my heart to you my dearest.

Dare I say I love you. 

You have stole my heart.

A modern day thief.

You knew my one weakness...

A simple kiss. 

Though you are not near.

In my dreams you are so clear.

Love you know my every thought.

My every wish, my deepest secret.

I think of writing you all the time

What can I tell you that you don't already know?

I never wanted to see you half as bad as I do now.

I would give anything to see you.

Shall I compare thee to a summers day?

Shall I compare thee to any day?

Is there anything thing I can say?

For you my heart lay.

You are my heart

My soul, 

My darkest secret,

My only weakness.

Reviews

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

"Shall I compare thee to a summers day?
Shall I compare thee to any day?
Is there anything thing I can say?
For you my heart lay."

lovely, passionate stanza!

[Missy Moooooo]

Beautiful.

[Angelic Surrender]

Beautiful work :) Keep it up

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Very beautiful. I like the Shakespearean influence.

[dan nacario]

i think the first line is inspired by Shakespeare's sonnet 18...but still you wrote it in your own style..very nice..

[Aka_Kitsune]

I must say Dominic_995 has a point when he asks of Shakespeare, it sounds like there is some, i love it though :D great write

[BikerAngie]

This is so perfect my boyfriend is all the way across he country taking care of a sick relative while I take care of my mom. I so identified with this poem brought tears to me. he is in California I am on opposite coast in NC

[外人 (Gaiji..]

do i see a glimpse of Shakespeare in this poem? *___*
I could definitely say i caught a glimpse of him in "Mirror, mirror on the wall" as well, i mean the theme "inner beauty is the one that really counts" (you can see he believes the same from some of his great works like for example "My mistress' eyes").
Well, keep this way and i'll become addicted to your poems ! They're already perfect plus you're changing your ancient greeks' myths for Shakespeare (seriously, i love his sonnets) *___*

[T. Michele Smock]

nice

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Loving and desirable emotions in each line. Nicely done.