The beauty of war

The beauty of war

A Poem by MandaBear
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This is my take on Aphrodite and Ares. They had a secret love that really wasn't all that secret. Love or Hate let me know!

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Two ultimate forces join together
One of the sea and one of the gods.
Beauty and Blood lust.
Caught in the net of love.

One married to looks;
One married to war.
Two bodies collide 
Becoming one soul.

She rotates in agony; 
From the birth of evil.
Two supreme forces,
Terror and Fear.

The perfect pair
Beauty and destruction.
Nothing will keep them apart.
Not even an invisible net.

Two ultimate forces connected.
Decisive, determined and fearless.
Sexually attractive and dazzling beauty.
True love can overcome any boundary. 

Aphrodite and Ares How do protect something so perfect without evil?

© 2013 MandaBear


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Old wise saying. "Opposite attract." In the legend of the myths. Many were lover's left behind and forgotten. I like the story and the possibilities create by your poem. I like the question at the end of the poem. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


like it


Posted 12 Years Ago


love and hate are two sides of the same coin... Indifference is their opposite. It seems the onlookers simply enjoy the show. a provoking write, especially liked the second stanza. Thanks.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I LOVE aphrodite and Ares! It is one of my favorite's from mythology! You did such a rockin' job on this :) To my favorites it goes...

Posted 12 Years Ago


ok, i don't know what it is, but it got it ! Something that makes it interesting and pleasant to read. Great work, Amanda =D I love reading your poems *__* !!

PS: I'm rating you only 100/100 because it doesn't let me put a higher number -.-

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nice! I likey ^_^

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on March 30, 2012
Last Updated on June 27, 2013
Tags: history, war, secret love, lovers, poem, poetry


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