Looks can kill

I took Socrates quote "Beauty is a short lived Tyranny" and turned it into this poem i hope you like it :)

Going out for a night of fun.

Dolling your self up.

The perfect clothes;

The perfect look.

Lips a bight cherry red.

Cheeks a rosy pink.

Eyes sparkling  like glitter.

And your ready to hit the town.

You got your girls 

In the club dancing.

Tonight your letting loose.

Your Beautiful and your gonna have fun.

A boy notices you from across the room.

Your feminine charms are working.

He comes over to see what he can get.

For he has fallen for your spell.

Soon your in each others arms 

Your smothering lipstick between lips.

Hands in each others hair.

Things are heating up.

A wild night is about to pursue.

Now your left with no lip stick on,

With a knife in your back,

And a note by the bed which read......

Beauty is a short lived tyranny.  

Reviews

[Thea]

The ending is just great...This one was creative...
:)))

[Aka_Kitsune]

a surprising turn of events :) great write

[T. Michele Smock]

very neat

[Cassie Fraga]

wow!!! twists and turns of truth in message... very clever write!!

[Angelic Surrender]

So true

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Wow! A powerful and dramatic poem, with sharp imagery and an important message for this day and age. Great job!

[The White Wolf]

Bravo! Great from start to finish and contains a nugget of truth and a solid moral. No critique on my end. Great work:)

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

It was very interesting to read! Great job:)