I have a confession to make

I have a confession to make

A Poem by MandaBear
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Just something i thought of, I hope its funny :P Let me know what you think.

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Let me tell you a little secret.
You must tell no one.
This is top-secret, hush,hush.
I trust you can keep it confidential.

This may come as a surprise.
Maybe even a shock to you.
If this ever got out,
I wouldn't know what to do.

Not your mom,
Not your dad,
Not your friend,
Not even your best friend can know.

This can never be in the history book.
Science can't explain it.
English won't grammar correct it.
Math can't even Solve it.

I bet you are wondering what it could be?
I bet you are thinking just tell me already!
Well wait no more my dearest reader.
For I have a confession to make.

Okay, Okay I must confess My favorite color is Pink............I bet you didn't see that coming.

© 2015 MandaBear


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Nicely written.
Very well executed.

The twist made me smile-- But I expected something more dramatic..!
Though honestly by the last few lines I figured it it'd be something amusing rather then shocking.

Thanks for submitting to the contest friend.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I loved the build-up & playfulness. I must be the only reader who was hoping for a little more in the "big reveal" . . . something equal to the rest of your cleverly-written poem!

Posted 8 Years Ago


This made me giggle. :) Great poem!

Posted 9 Years Ago


LOL! Very well penned! Check out my "Listen Up!"

NOTES:
Science [can't] explain it.
English [won't] grammar correct it.
Math [can't] even Solve it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


hahahaha, i like it, youve built up my interest and i wanted so badly to look at the bottom for a spoiler. a nice surprise haha

Posted 10 Years Ago


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ron
Lol that is so funny. I loved the build up and then the twist.

Posted 11 Years Ago


MandaBear

11 Years Ago

Thanks I had fun writing it I was laughing when I was writing it lol
ron

11 Years Ago

Lol, it was very refreshing, thank you for sharing.
hahahhaha very playfull poem and i had to read it twice cuz i liked it so much.hands down one of the coolest poems i read today .didnt expect that ending at all.

Posted 11 Years Ago


MandaBear

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much!! I am glad you liked it enough to read it twice. :)
loooooved it!
cant stop laughing!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


LOL I just broke out laughing when i read that. Perfect :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


MandaBear

11 Years Ago

Thank you! =) it was really fun to write
So captivating yet facetious. Loved it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


MandaBear

11 Years Ago

Thank you!

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Added on March 27, 2012
Last Updated on November 2, 2015
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