Super Hero in Action

Let me know what you think. I looked at a prompt and it said write a poem about your hero so here is my spin on it:)

My hero is someone that knows little, 

But has a thirst for knowledge.

This person is shy at first,

But in the right situation she's very loud.

My hero knows no limits yet somehow goes over the edge.

She is creative yet kinda messy.

She uses her humor as a shield.

Strong yet weak; Loud yet meek.

You wouldn't know it when you first see her

but she loves history and how its made.

Her favorite color is pink and she hates yellow.

She loves granny smith apples and is rather mellow.

An average girl with outlandish dreams. 

Hoping one day she will see her favorite band in concert.

Has many friends but only few close ones,

A best friend with the same name.

My hero is a girl...

My hero is a natural born goof....

My hero works hard...

My hero know no bounds...

You might be wondering who my hero is.

You might be astonished when I tell you.

Well, be prepared to be in amazement.

My hero is.........Me.

Moral of this story is There is no better Hero then your self. You are more powerful then you think.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are true. We need great strength a lot of knowledge to keep a float in our world. I like the way you led me to the logical ending. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I love the moral! This is truly fantastic :)

[Calypso]

Aww how sweet

[Angelic Surrender]

Cool :) I like it. Rely only on yourself and no one can let you down. great write :)

[The White Wolf]

Yes! Be your own super hero! I love it!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

it's nice to see someone with such self-confidence

:D

[patricia]

ha ha i knew it was you when i read the line about the apples, this was a great idea, that is what i like about your poetry it is so full of variety, you try all different subjects. my favourite line was.. creative yet kinda messy. A great poem, thankyou.

[Abbie]

great poem! I love it.the moral seems really good too! nice write! keep writing! :)

[Backlight Burner]

Great poem!

Awesome moral :)