Sound Wave

I hope you like it. It was for a prompt. For this prompt you must write something that involves sound. So I hope I got it :) Let me know. Love or Hate?

I once had a voice, 

So pure and sweet;

But curiosity got the best of me.

So I gave it up you see. 

No more singing, giggling or laughing.

But for him I would give anything.

I gave my voice to an evil doer.

Who had no intention of giving it back.

On one condition you see,

I must kiss my true love in 3 days time.

Or forever silence will be mine.

And she will own me for all of time.

So I set out on my quest.

To get true loves kiss.

With my trusty crab friend and my loyal fish, 

I will find out how to be Part of your world.

Finally I find my prince. 

Handsome and nice as can be.

For my heart and eyes I only have for thee.

Your lips will be mine. 

We meet and fall in love.

But the mean on witch has a plan,

To take away my man.

So I cant have true loves kiss.

She plans on marrying him.

Oh, what to do, oh, my love so true.

I will get help that is what I must do.

Father will know what to do.

They battle it out,

A fight for ultimate justice.

With his mighty power from the sea,

He beats the evil witch he he he.

In the end the power of love triumphs all.

And with true loves kiss......

The spell was broken and I got my Voice back

And live happily ever after.

Moral of the story: Don't go giving your voice away because you might need it.

Reviews

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Creative piece, with fairytale-like qualities mixed in. Enjoyed this piece. Nicely done.

[Buniheart]

Very nice, and the story it brings to mind is of the Little Mermaid! I love how you took that story and wrote it into 9 stanzas!! Nice work! :D

[Silver_Anime]

very nice =]

[ATG]

A very well written and entertaining poem. I did like the story told in the poem, though I am pretty sure it was based on the Little Mermaid. Overall, a very good read.

[jennifer little]

wonderful work thanks for sharring this with me

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

cool!

reminiscent of the great fairy tale of the little mermaid

[Cassie Fraga]

this was a clever write indeed... the moral was expressed very well here... and yes it does have a "little Mermaid" feel to it... nice write!!

[外人 (Gaiji..]

love the way, no matter whether you dip inside ancient greek's wars or fairytale scenarios, you're always able to make us LIVE it ! Anyway, it also made me thought of mermaids ... are you a mermaid? xD

[Aka_Kitsune]

very interesting write, great job though :) i like how you included the moral at the ending