The hand that rocks the cradle

Something i made up from some words that i took from ones game :) I used Pain,anger,disappointment, car radio, smash, and blue. I hope you like it:)

I found you in my bed with another.

Oh, the disappointment I feel.

You told me you wanted to start anew,

I guess that was a lie too.

Oh, the anger bellowing in my heart.

The pain you have inflicted a upon me,

Is greater than any agony I have felt before.

You smashed what was left of us with one kiss.

I turn on the car radio and listen to our song.

Trying to forget the hurt I feel.

After seeing you laying there, 

With her of all people, you expect forgiveness?

No, no more will I hear you 

Never again will you see me.

Never again will I care for you.

I never want to see you again.

After seeing you in my bed with her,

My best friend, I hope you are happy.

I hope you got what you wanted.

For you both lost something you cant replace.

You rocked this cradle for the last time.

I want you out of my life forever.

I hope the bed was comfortable,

Since you will never see it again.

You made my heart once red turn an ugly shade of blue.... I hope she was worth sleeping in my bed for...   

Author's Note

Tell me what you think?

Reviews

[jennifer little]

nice poem

[外人 (Gaiji..]

oh honey !! ... Great poem (as always), good imagination (I wouldn't be able to write about something like that).

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

great title!

it's such a unique take on a topic like this

[Coyote Poetry]

Catching someone in your bed with another. Could leave someone in a dangerous position. I did like the ending. Somethings cannot be forgiven. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Thea]

Aw...This topic is quite unusual for me...The emotions are well crafted...You expressed everything here very well...Great work.
:)))

[Aka_Kitsune]

wow...full of raw emotion and very well written you did an amazing job :D

[Abbie]

very nice, emotional piece! I really like your wording and the description of the feelings. I think that they really ensnare the reader in the poem. Good work! :)

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

I can hear this in my head as a catchy country-pop song...Great job with this piece!

[patricia]

it takes a person a long time to trust again after something like that, a nice poem, with good healthy anger. I can hear the pain and disappointment too. Very stirring. Thankyou.