Walk in the city

i couldn't sleep so i made this :) tell me what you think

Breeze in my hair

a spring in my step

not a care in the world 

Just taking a walk in the city.

Following signs to nobody knows

maybe stop for a silly pose.

Smelling the pretty rose,

Just walking in the city.

All the Architecture more special then the last

Yet tons of people tend to pass.

Museums, fountains sidewalks galore 

I feel still i am looking for more.

My destination is not reached 

For a detour has come within my grasp.

Lots of gravel to travel; Road to ride on.

All from Just walking in the city.

Radios on, Maps out and many miles ahead.

Souvenirs to be bought.

Food to be eaten; Drinks to be drank.

Traveling to the beat of a different drummer.

All began with a walk in the city......

Reviews

[Missy Moooooo]

Nice job. I for one...hates the city :P so this was like WHY would you do that? HAHA
but nice job.

[jennifer little]

i liked this poem well said and well done keep up the good and awsome work you did an amazing poem here keep it up thanks for sharing ur lovely work with me

[外人 (Gaiji..]

very cool ! That made me remember of the times I go out to take pizza for dinner, it's very close to my home but I always take the longest path (which takes me like 20 min instead of 5) to enjoy the journey :) Sometimes the journey is better than the place you want to arrive :) Just a question I've been asking all the time reading this poem: Where do you live (which city)? xD

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

so many images are in me head now!

thx for sharing