Walk in the city

i couldn't sleep so i made this :) tell me what you think

Breeze in my hair

a spring in my step

not a care in the world 

Just taking a walk in the city.

Following signs to nobody knows

maybe stop for a silly pose.

Smelling the pretty rose,

Just walking in the city.

All the Architecture more special then the last

Yet tons of people tend to pass.

Museums, fountains sidewalks galore 

I feel still i am looking for more.

My destination is not reached 

For a detour has come within my grasp.

Lots of gravel to travel; Road to ride on.

All from Just walking in the city.

Radios on, Maps out and many miles ahead.

Souvenirs to be bought.

Food to be eaten; Drinks to be drank.

Traveling to the beat of a different drummer.

All began with a walk in the city......

Reviews

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Reminds me of my first visit to NYC, and now I am currently living here. Nicely done.

[Coyote Poetry]

Nothing better then to have free time to think and travel. I miss the days when I had long vacations and no rush to get anywhere. I enjoyed the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Aka_Kitsune]

so care free and peaceful :D i love it

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Reminds me of my trip to DC. Great poem! :-)

[Abbie]

good poem! i really like the whole idea of this poem! great write! so keep writing!

[Courtney Eastman]

Very descriptive. I could totally imagine myself walking through the streets in New York just going with the flow. Keep up the good work :)

[Calypso]

This makes me think of last summer. I had a car for the first time and a little bit of money. I used to drive around all day with the windows rolled down and music blaring.
This poem reminds me of the magic of night and how I love to walk and drive as it's becoming dark.

[patricia]

yet tons of people tend to pass, i so agree with this one, it seems only children, see the total wonders in life, i hate it when i waste all those special opportunities to really see. Thankyou for this adventure, send me a postcard. Thanks.

[Thea]

Wow...Totally an astounding piece...Like it!
:)))