Love, Trust and Hope

I was challenged to use those 3 words and make them into a poem. So tell me what you think? Love or Hate?

A vicious monster looking for someone.

The other half to this scary side.

Anyone that isn't scared to see the real him.

He wants to be bitten by love.

He sees himself in the mirror 

Only a cracked reflection is staring back.

Something so ugly he thinks 

How could anyone trust this face?

Getting ready for his big date.

All shaved and prim and popper.

Teeth gleaming brighter than the moon.

He takes a deep breath as he opens the door.

She stands before him and doesn't run away.

Wide eyed and heart beating fast 

This monster lets his insecurities give way.

For you see, my dears the bite has been bit.

Soon they hit it off; monster and woman.

For they make plans for next week.

All his dreams have come true.

I am in awe because of you.

Here's to hoping you find your Beauty to your Beast.  

Reviews

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

I think this is romantic...therefore, I feel this is more like love.

It's neat to see you put in a little story too.

[Rae Elizabeth]

Awesome (:

[Missy Moooooo]

This is great. Nice write.

[patricia]

This is great, all it takes...to make us feel less ugly...to see that look in another's eyes that say we are lovable. I especially liked the line...only a cracked reflection is staring back. By the time I got to the fourth stanza, the monster had become cute. I loved ...the bite has been bit. Thanks.

[Courtney Eastman]

I love the last line! It's so cute but in a darker sort of way. Very nice poem :)

[Jordan's Back]

She stands before him and doesn't run away.
Wide eyed and heart being fast
This monster lets his insecurities give way.
For you see, my dears the bite has been bit.

Perfect!!!! You nailed this piece

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

I like this! It's a very interesting, entertaining read. I like the classic "Beauty and Beast" theme, and I think you did a good job with it. :-)