Baby's gone

I listening to a song when i thought of this :) i hope you enjoy it :)

When are you coming home baby?

Been days since I've seen your precious face.

I didn't know it was going to be this way. 

There aren't any words to say.

All I know is, Baby your gone.

I don't know when your coming home.

I'm never gonna find another man like you.

Oh, Baby I'm crying .

I see you in my dreams at night.

Every day I pray for you with all my might.

I am calling for you....Baby...

Baby please come home

So I am not alone.

This is because of you. whatever will i do? Something just isn't right. 

I hope with all my might i will get to see you tonight.

Baby please come home....

Reviews

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I love this. I know a lot of people can relate to it. :) Great job.

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Would certainly be a good tune for a song. Very lyrical write. Nicely done.

[Thea]

This would make a really great song...Beautiful piece.
:)))

[外人 (Gaiji..]

:( ... right now I'm hating that guy I don't even know just because he dumped u ! Don't worry, u're definitely gonna find someone better !! :)

[Silver_Anime]

great poem! ^_^

[Aka_Kitsune]

great job that was a good read it was full of emotion

[jennifer little]

wonderful poetry great job i loved it thanks for sharing this with me

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

seems kinda lyrical to me...

good write

[Missy Moooooo]

This reminded me of your baby was dead. My friend would relate to this poem. Amazing write.

[patricia]

I enjoyed the line...everyday I pray for you with all my might....Hope he came home. Thanks.