Oh, My love

just something i came up with while talking to someone :) Enjoy

Oh, My love What can i say that i haven't spoken before?

Your body is a temple, i wish to see the treasure it holds.

I want your soul to be intertwined in mine.
Your love has stolen my heart... and I don't want it back.

Oh, My love What can I write that hasn't been written before?

Your dreams are what i wish i could dream.

I want to be your fantasy and your reality.

Your every thought when you get up and go to sleep.

Oh, My love What can I sing that hasn't been sung before?

Your voice is like angels from above.

I want to hear you everyday just so i never miss a sound.

Your lips and mine i would be looking for abound.

Oh, My love let me count the ways 

You have my heart, my soul and my love.

I want you to be mine forever

Your love is my love and together we are unstoppable.

Author's Note

Tell me what you think

Reviews

[CJ Battiste]

I really really liked this. =)

[Cathy Wattam]

Lovely poem, delightful flow. Reminded me of familiar songs from long ago.

[25syd25]

amazing and beautiful

[Jeffery-Maximilian-Kolb..]

Simply Beautiful!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Love indeed is the ultimate paradox of us sinners, well done, good read.

[Matthew Ryan Hardy]

Such great love in this poem, I really love it. I wish one day I can have a girl that loves me as much as you love this guy you write to. I just love it. :) Really nice, nothing I can say about this is bad, REALLY GOOD 100/100 :)

Matthew Hardy

[Backlight Burner]

I loved this!!!!!!!!!!!
100/100

[外人 (Gaiji..]

oh honey, great poem (guess I've written this to every single poem I've read from yours). I love every single verse of this one, especially "I want to be your fantasy and your reality". We can definitely see you've written it with all your heart for example when you say "I want your soul to be intertwined in mine". Simply: Great job =D

[Missy Moooooo]

Amazing job. What a perfect way to express love. and I feel the same way. Amazing :)

[Aka_Kitsune]

you did amazing! :D great read to wake me up haha