Guns Blazing

Tell me what you think. Even if you hate it! I want to know but if you like it i really want to know lol

Get ready for a battle that you cant win. 

Grab your best weapon and get ready for the fight for your life.

Are you ready? I don't think your ready.

I'm hotter than a barrel of a squeeze machine gun.

First shot fired...Bang....

You missed an easy shot.

Kinda like your first relationship.

I guess she wasn't your midnight queen.

Second shot fired...Bang....

You grazed her arm.

Just like her first beating.

I guess she was the best punching bag.

Third shot fired...Bang...

You struck in the heart.

It was bad enough you smashed her love.

I guess she loved you more than you loved her.

Unfortunately for you my dear the battle is not yet over

She has come back for revenge.

You thought you killed her but you were DEAD wrong!

See you in Hell she said as you take your last breath...

You may have fought the battle but I won the war.

Author's Note

I hope you liked it:)

Reviews

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Well done, Amanda :)

[Backlight Burner]

I love the ending :)

[外人 (Gaiji..]

love the way you turned love into a war and made it so real, it's like we see it in front of us while we read !

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

i enjoy how you used a gun to express your feelings!

this was a good choice to make.

[Aka_Kitsune]

beautiful poem :")

[Thea]

Totally creative! I enjoyed reading it...Well done, Amanda!
:)))

[Coyote Poetry]

A nice use for a weapon. Love and relationship can be weapons to take down a life. I like the many strong statements in this poem.
"Unfortunately for you my dear the battle is not yet over
She has come back for revenge."
Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Cant resist a little dark humor. Nicely done, Amanda!

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I like it... a little bit of dark humor.

Chloe