Used to be...

I hope you like it. I just made it up as i went along :)

I used to be beautiful

I used to be amazing 

I used to be all you needed

I was once your girl.

Now I am nothing to you 

I am a disease; an unwanted infection.

You say I am the worst kind of poison.

A contamination not worth saving.

I used to be loved. 

I used to be wanted. 

I used to be your number one.

I was once your muse.

Now I am just an illness to you.

I am pollution in your mind, 

Tainting your heart forever.

I am an impurity on your soul.

I guess you could say I am a curse

I am a virus; an contagion.

I am the plague you wish would go away.

I cause more trouble then i am worth.

I will no longer be your curse.....

Author's Note

tell me what you think

Reviews

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Very interesting! I like the virus/parasite theme, I think you pulled it off nicely. Great job.

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Great poem !! Do you mind if i post it on my facebook so that my friends can see it?

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I like it though it is certainly sad-your descriptions are very vivid.

Chloe

[Sunflower]

i love this absolutely love this, i feel everything and it brought my memories back and hit me right in the heart, very well expressed.. nice write

[Courtney Eastman]

I really like how you compare yourself to a disease (not that you are lol) It gets the point across in a real creative but effective way. Good job!

[Jordan's Back]

Now I am nothing to you
I am a disease; an unwanted infection.
You say I am the worst kind of poison.
A contamination not worth saving.

I have felt this way several times

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

This is really good :)

[jennifer little]

nice work thanks for sharing this with me