Used to be...

Used to be...

A Poem by MandaBear
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I hope you like it. I just made it up as i went along :)

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I used to be beautiful
I used to be amazing 
I used to be all you needed
I was once your girl.

Now I am nothing to you 
I am a disease; an unwanted infection.
You say I am the worst kind of poison.
A contamination not worth saving.

I used to be loved. 
I used to be wanted. 
I used to be your number one.
I was once your muse.

Now I am just an illness to you.
I am pollution in your mind, 
Tainting your heart forever.
I am an impurity on your soul.


I guess you could say I am a curse
I am a virus; an contagion.
I am the plague you wish would go away.
I cause more trouble then i am worth.

I will no longer be your curse.....

© 2013 MandaBear


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You took the words right out my heart! Great Job

Posted 12 Years Ago


I've felt this way. I feel this way now Thanks .

Posted 12 Years Ago


heartfelt and emotional piece. Raw, deep write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Last line really is good. I love it, great description and emotion.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is raw and emotional!
You certainly have a way with words.

Posted 12 Years Ago


another emotional poem described very well :) great job

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very nice write, relate able for some.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is my kind of poetry. Direct and honest thoughts. I like the way you expressed the situation and the very nice ending. Sometime a goodbye is better then swimming in disappointment. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


very interesting...great write..


Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on March 12, 2012
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