Forbidden

i had to get this out or i was going to burst let me know if it is any good :)

A forbidden love

A feeling so strong the speed of light couldn't catch it

A warmth, a passion lit by a burning fire

A unworthy situation 

Calls for a unworthy solution 

Feelings rising higher and higher

A forbidden love 

An urge so great nothing can ward it off 

Must fight the uncompromising obsession 

My love; my sweetest infatuation

If only you knew what you do to me 

The hunger I have for you

The thirst I have for your might 

The emotions I have are full of excitement 

My body tingles for your touch

Your words pierce my heart  

Like a arrow to a target.

For now my love we can grow fonder but it will not be forbidden for long....

Reviews

[外人 (Gaiji..]

I may be goin' maybe a lil' bit out of topic, but u know who this poem made me think about all the time? Romeo and Juliet !! It seems like one of them just decided to come to life coming out from Shakespeare's play and wrote this to the other. All the forbidden love stuff incredibly well described really made me think about them :) Great job !!

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

Beautiful!!! I love the descriptive way you wrote this. I hope you write more like it!

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Very unique and powerful write. Although with the last line I believe you mean "we can grow FONDER" not founder.

Nicely done!

[Coyote Poetry]

Those acts of danger and going to the forbidden zones of life. Allow us to test what is real or not. I like the way you led the poem into the strong ending. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Chris]

A different form... unique flow.

Thought-full.

[jennifer little]

great work keep up the great work

[Aka_Kitsune]

:) i like the mood of this and the title suits it well, great job :D

[Silver_Anime]

This is really nice! Its so sweet. You basically just wrote down what my feelings are for this person I like xD haha

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

nice way to vent out your feelings!