Broken Heart

just something i wrote, i hope your enjoy it.

You find the guy of your dreams, seemingly perfect nothing strange about him.

 

Then he rips your heart out like a song loosing its rhythm.

 

Leaving your heart for dead on the floor.....

 

Crashing and burning your soul hurts with the intensity of a thousand suns.

 

The guy of your dreams becomes the worst enemy but the best friend to your tears.

 

Showing emotion is to much like giving him power after he took yours away.

 

Love is like a piano, First you must learn to play it by the rules then forget the rules and play with your heart.

 

You Find the guy of your dreams, seemingly perfect, nothing strange about him....

 

Pouring your heart out to keep what is now lost but whats the point?

 

Is he really worth playing the piano for? Is he worth playing by the rules?

 

                 Your all i need, My love, My Valentine.....

Reviews

[JanuaryDreamer♥]

WOW!! Great peice of work!! This totally made my day! I can really relate to this poem! I've been there so many times XP the emotion in the poem was very clear and hit like Cupid's arrow, right dead center in the heart! Thanks for RR this to me!! :) Keep up the great work!

[Sophie]

Wow!!! This is brilliant. I love the line, 'love is like a piano' it's such a good way to describe it. Well done!

[trainwreck]

I love the line: Is he really worth playing the piano for?
It really strikes home and strikes a chord. These lines seem like they could be split in two, which is really a style point of whether you want to have additional internal rythym or not. Great write either way!

[Chelsea]

This was a wonderful poem! I really like the metaphors you used here, all very creative!
It's hard isn't it, when Mr. Charming isn't that great a guy... Uses you and tosses your heart away :(
I know the feeling.
I loved the line about love being like a piano. I don't play piano, but I play a few other instruments. So I can relate to this one :) It's so true, you lay the cement down than you can play from the heart!
I have a few suggestions for this poem, to fix it up. So message me if you're interested!
Well done!

[Jessica Samuelsen]

very nice

[WrittingCrazed]

WOW, i love this poem. I related to it A LOT. do keep writting and sending me Read Request. I love your writing. (: