What am I ?

What am I ?

A Poem by MandaBear
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try and guess

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In a battle of rage or a simple walk down memory lane; we generally discover a world unknown.

 

Of all the adventures i have been on, I like most of them.

 

The laughter from the ones who look is a great joy you hear.

 

The hatred that I feel when people rip me apart because they don't like what they see hurts me.

 

In my day, they walked right past me before they look inside my many souls.

 

Seeing people walk b and not notice me makes me want to cry.

 

While the earth keeps moving by I still stand in the very same spot that I was rested I wasn't needed.

 

I only see the light for a while but its worth it; So people can see what i have to offer.

 

But, I am happy yo day that what is inside will always remain until the soft touch of a tear hits the very fabric of that i am made.

 

The thought of being carried around and seeing new things is a great pleasure

 if you just open up and look inside.

© 2016 MandaBear


Author's Note

MandaBear
If you think you have the answer give it a guess. i will reveal the answer in my status if no one has guessed it or if someone has! So good luck!!

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I must admit, I did see the answer and it makes a lote more sense now. My best guess was going to be a statue, and then for some reason I got sandcastle in my head, but book is a lot better answer than those. This was a very clever riddle, I enjoyed reading it and trying to figure out what it was.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Wow. Truly exquisite. I have to admit I thought it was a person for I while. I'm afraid I cheated and read comments. Very good!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Hmmmm.. I think it's a diary!... or a journal?
Or I know! A photo album!! Tel me the answer! :(

Posted 7 Years Ago


MandaBear

7 Years Ago

It's a book! But great guess!
Red Rose

7 Years Ago

Oh well! Hehe ^-^
I agree, I would probably go for photographs. But then, some clues don't make sense...very nice one indeed, kept me thinking.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Its a book!!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I"m thinking camera

Posted 13 Years Ago


Is it a digital camera? Memory lane... it saves data and stuff

Souls could be referred as photos because the people that have been took many pictures could feel several things. While things do move around and all, it can be rested to take pictures and stuff.

Kind of intriguing poem, riddle, and extremely mysterious. It might be a camera or something else but that's my guess.

Pretty cool.

Posted 13 Years Ago


It's a Flag!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I am going to have to think about this -

Posted 13 Years Ago


a misunderstood person? :) lol, i really have no clue, but this is really cool(: good job!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on February 8, 2011
Last Updated on December 30, 2016
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