#Society (Tetractys #7)

#Society (Tetractys #7)

A Poem by MandaBear
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Just something I made up

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Thin 
Society 
Just the fat side 
All we see is the fat half 
Not beauty, not brains and not personality 

© 2016 MandaBear


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KBW
It's sad but true. People should be looked at for their character and heart. Not what can be seen on the outside. Sometimes the most seemingly perfect people are the biggest messes.

Posted 8 Years Ago


That's how our society is, it doesn't see the attached inner beauty, only focuses on the outside perfection... I think it's a wonderful write with a great topic... Very well done Buddy...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 8 Years Ago


MandaBear

8 Years Ago

Thank you I am glad you liked it. Yeah while I can say being bigger can cause more health issues tha.. read more
Exactly! It's like pointing out a "Plus Sized Model"! Why can't they all just be models? Great poem!

Posted 8 Years Ago


MandaBear

8 Years Ago

I am happy to see you liked it. I know who gave them the authority to decided who is beautiful and w.. read more

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Added on August 2, 2016
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