Independence (Tanka # 58)

For a 10 word contest on here

The battle was July fourth 

General stallion rode fast 

In blaze of glory 

Fireworks fire from the cannons

As fight for independence 

Reviews

[Wicahpi]

I enjoy Tankas! Thank you for sharing your Holiday tanka and entering it in the 10 Words I Give contest. Perfectly executed. Kudos!

[MandaBear]

Thank you!! I am so glad you enjoyed it! and I think your 10 words I give contests are the most fun!

[Wicahpi]

I am very glad to hear that. Thank you!

[MandaBear]

Yep! and I can't wait until the next one!

[Wicahpi]

I am already thinking about what words will be on the list :)