Mysterious Woman (Tanka #43)

Who is she? No one knows but your heart...

You are the beauty of my dreams 

With your long hair flowing down 

Your body is perfect 

A goddess just out of reach 

Mysterious beauty I want you bad 

Reviews

[chimetime]

I like it. I'd see about expanding on the idea of what makes her mysterious though.

[Inject Positivity]

Mysterious.... This really provokes thoughts and expresses really well... You know my heart jumps when I see a new poem of yours... Only 15 to go Manda, can't believe the day is that near... Lovely Buddy...

Regards
Dhiman

[MandaBear]

Thank you. I am glad you liked my poem. I know it's crazy how close!