Lucid (Tanka #37)

I saw this photo on facebook and was inspired

When all my troubles are free

The world becomes bright and clear 

That is when I truly see 

A new world inside my own mind 

When my eyes are closed shut 

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

i loved the first two lines more....it is absolutely true manda that when all our troubles are no where near us our mind and heart works better and it sees so many aspects of life and this world which we unable to see or think under trouble.... beautiful again mate.... full ratings!!!!

[MandaBear]

Thank you my friend =D

[SmittyJas]

Nice little poem well written and meaning full to me but I need to become Care Free in this society.