Picture this

Picture this

A Poem by MandaBear
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I have seen a lot of those Picture prompts so I decided to do my own. I hope you like it

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If I climbed into your camera what would I see?
Pictures of you or Pictures of me?
Long forgotten memories or just lost time?
Maybe just a few or many more 

If I climbed into your camera what would I see?
As far as the lens could take me
Nature, beauty, ruin, death?
Something just discovered or long lost?

If I climbed into your camera what would I see?
Happiness, sadness, joy, loneliness? 
A child, a mother, a father or brother?
A family or one person standing alone?

If you climbed into your camera what would you see?

© 2016 MandaBear


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The picture you chose for this work fits perfectly. I love how you used the line "If I climbed into your camera what would I see?" more than once. It really helps keep the flow of the poem in motion, and I also like how you changed it up with the last line. I really like this. Kudos!

Posted 8 Years Ago


MandaBear

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the kind review. I am so glad you liked it. I had fun writing it =D
Well expressed I would see a picture of my x wife taken long ago when she graduated from high school but now we are in love no more broken hearted lover say no more rather would be out there with the birds and butterflies and some bees.

Posted 8 Years Ago


first of all the picture of the poem is so beautiful.... it suits the theme of the poem.... to be honest i was lost in the past after reading your poem and thought about the questions you have asked here.... oh man! your mind has amazing power to capture minds.... loved it.... i expect this from my fav poetess..... 100ratings and smiles.....

Posted 8 Years Ago


MandaBear

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I wasn't so sure about this one but I am glad to see you liked it =) I was inspir.. read more

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Added on February 25, 2016
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