Meet Me At The Villa

Inspired by a contest on here. A photo prompt. Hope you like it.

Meet me at the villa where we first met 

Where the stairs seem never ending 

Where the smells of the days bread mixes with the air

Where my favorite flower lines the walkway 

Meet me at the villa that reminds you of our first kiss 

Reminds you of our soft lips touching for the first time 

Reminds you of the warmth of us radiated through our bodies  

Reminds you of our consuming passion as we remained in eternity  

Meet me at the villa where we first fell in love 

When we learned the meaning of love 

When we where the only ones in endless bliss 

When we started our journey together 

Meet me at the villa 

Where we first met,

Where we had our first kiss,

Where we first fell  in love 

I’ll be waiting…..

Reviews

[SmittyJas]

This is a lovely poem I understand the feeling of this kind of love that whispers in ones ears of true love always and that never ending kiss your next kiss is as good as your first kiss. Written so blissfully about the subject of love.

[MandaBear]

Thank you. I had a really wonderful muse for this poem.

[Wicahpi]

"Meet Me at the Villa" is adoringly sweet. You made excellent use of the given image with it's cobblestone and red floral. Deserving of a medal and one I'm glad to give. A delight to read! Thank you for your entry into the Picture Poem This Contest 2.

[MandaBear]

Thank you for the review and the medal. -=) It was sweet of you to like my poem enough to think it was worthy of one =) It was a great picture and I can't wait to see what one you pick next!

[Em]

I really enjoyed everything about his.You really painted a picture. I love the feeling put into it. Love is such a beautiful thing, and you painted a picture of it so well.

[MandaBear]

Thank you so much. I am glad you enjoyed my work =)

[devon]

I really like the idea of this poem, of a place being more than just that. It's a place that holds memory, love, and emotion. I like how the ending of the poem is a sort of cliffhanger - does the lover come back to the Villa? Or is the speaker left there to wait alone?

The picture is a beautiful aide to depict where your inspiration came from, too.

Beautiful writing!

[MandaBear]

Thank you so much. I am glad you liked it.

[A. Amos]

More please...there are some writes you don't want to finish and this was one. Passionate and neatly crafted!

[MandaBear]

Thank you very much. I am so glad you liked it =)

[A. Amos]

Loved it and you're most welcome.

[Inject Positivity]

whoa!!!! thats why you are my fav poetess..... the way you work with words and your deeply desired memories and feelings are amazing to read...... i can feel the love and sweetness manda..... and i guess you know the reason behind it......... full ratings!!!!

[MandaBear]

Thanks. I just wish this was true and I have the perfect person for it. Thanks for the review. =)

[Coyote Poetry]

A hopeful and beautiful poem dear friend. I like the description used. Create good place and memory. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[MandaBear]

Thank you for the kind review my dear friend. Just got really inspired by this photo

[Coyote Poetry]

You did very well and you are welcome.