What Have I Done?

Inspiration from "Curse of the golden flower" a foreign film.

What have I done wrong to earn your wrath?

What did I do to anger your fists?

What have I done to make you this way?

What have I done?

Your fists are filled with such anger 

Every hit more hateful than the last 

You take your feelings out on my body

What have I done?

You demand sex like it's the prize you've won

Somehow my body is just a slave waiting for its master

You show no mercy as you take vengeance on my soul 

What have I done?

You blame me for your short comings 

As if I had made you the way you are

Your soul is black and your heart blacker 

What have I done?

You delight in my pain of which you caused 

Watching me just sit and take it 

For waiting for death is the prize I seek 

What have I done to earn your wrath?

What have I done??

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem showing the strength of anger. Anger and violence lead to no-where. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to the very good question. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry. When someone always is facing anger and violence. Time to leave.
Coyote

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Hahah A good one really, even I was thinking for a while "What have I done??"

[JaneFoxscale]

A great write. One thing got through the editing though." You so no mercy as you take vengeance on my soul"
I think you might have meant show. ;) otherwise I liked it!

[MandaBear]

Yes thank you for pointing that out!! I will go and fix it now! Thank you for enjoying my little poem =) I am so glad you liked it =)

[Jim Gill III]

You engender lots of empathy for the victim in this poem. It breaks my heart when I think that there are so many who are trapped and abused in such a horrible manner. You certainly capture the extremes with this poem and "Lets Make Love"