Can't Take It

Just something I came up with before bed

You're to good for me 

I don't deserve your love 

What I have done is unforgivable 

I will only break your heart

Get out now before it's to late 

Before you get consumed into my darkness 

Before there is no way out 

Before the inevitable heart break 

I have done you wrong 

I've given my love away 

Leading you on down my path 

A path of lies and destruction 

I've done you wrong 

I lied about my feelings 

Told you things you wanted to hear 

With no real emotion behind it 

Get out while you still can 

Still time for you emotions to heal 

Before my web sucks you in more

Before more damage can be done 

I can't love you when my heart belongs to someone else 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Love isn't fair.
"Get out while you still can
Still time for you emotions to heal
Before my web sucks you in more
Before more damage can be done
I can't love you when my heart belongs to someone else "
We love what we can't have. I like the honest tone leading to the logical ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[MandaBear]

I can say sometimes life imitates art. I am glad you liked my words =)

[Coyote Poetry]

I did. You became my muse for my poetry tonight.

[MandaBear]

I am very honored and humbled that you would pick me as your muse =)

[Coyote Poetry]

This is why I read. Need positive motivation to write.

[Willard Wells]

It is said to find your one true love, but alas I have found many loves, but it goes beyond love and to the one you love that you can put up with sometimes.

It's not always completely about love you have for someone. We also want love in return.

Nice work and thanks.

[MandaBear]

Thank you. I am glad you liked it =)

[abderrahmane dakir]

My life taught me that the someone else who your heart loves could in love with another someone else. We hate that we have although we search another bird which we have not. Thank you for this lovable poem.

[MandaBear]

Thank you. I am glad you liked it =)

[abderrahmane dakir]

You are welcome.

[M.E.Lyle]

Aha, the ole lead em' on and break their heart guilt trip syndrome. Nicely done, a little emotional warning wrapped up in a poem...cool.

[MandaBear]

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it =) Just came to me. a weird thought at 12 in the morning lol