He makes me forget

He makes me forget

A Poem by MandaBear
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Sometimes It's good to forget

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I miss you although I shouldn’t 
I never forgot how you treated me 
So sweet in the beginning and left me at the end 
No goodbye just left 
Now I’m with him
He treats me like a queen 
Which is more than I can say for you 
But I think of you sometimes
Maybe it’s my head wishing it was different 
Maybe my heart hoping it was you instead 
Maybe it’s me wanting more 
Maybe it’s me wanting you 
I can’t forget how you made me feel 
The way you made me feel like a princess 
Like we were the only two people in the world 
Like  I was your whole world 
The times you left me with no reply 
The times you made it seem like it was my fault 
The times you were angry 
Making me believe I was always the cause 
Tell me one minute you loved me 
Only to find you were telling others the same 
Feeding me your sweet words 
When they didn’t mean a thing
Now I’m with him 
He puts me before himself
Which is more than I can say for you 
But I think of you less now 
He has taken my heart 
He puts a smile on my face 
He makes me forget everything you ever did
He makes me forget you 

© 2015 MandaBear


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This is really well written :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


MandaBear

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your kind compliment =)
Oh my dear fav poetess you are amazing.....The feelings you share through your poetry are absolute delight to read....Another sweet and passionate work.....Full ratings!!!!.....That person should read this dear frnd.....

Posted 8 Years Ago


MandaBear

8 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words. I am so glad you like my little writings. I'm not sure if he will rea.. read more
Inject Positivity

8 Years Ago

Life turns in unexpected ways Manda, someday he will find you....Love will bring him to you and if a.. read more
MandaBear

8 Years Ago

I hope you are right. I love him so much I don't think I really understood love until he came aroun.. read more
Wow, this is great and something I can certainly relate to!

Posted 8 Years Ago


MandaBear

8 Years Ago

I am so glad you liked it =)
Gentle and beautiful journey to perfect ending.
"Now I’m with him
He puts me before himself
Which is more than I can say for you
But I think of you less now "
The words above are true love defined. The person you love needs before your own needs. Real love. Thank you dear poet for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote



Posted 8 Years Ago


Hmm, interesting. I've always found "falling in love" at my age to be a dangerous endeavor. Heck, love in any human form is a dangerous endeavor, but at mine it is a most foolish action. The youth of our age (i.e. time) or of any age harbor no understanding of what true devoted love is. As far as I'm concerned, I only see as them desiring their companion for selfish reasons hidden under a mask of devotion. What we want is what we want. No one else matters. But until one can see past that, there is no hope for any love. Yet, you have to a measure demonstrated a sort of throwing off of that selfishness, through the lovers devotion to making the narrator feel truly loved unlike her previous lover. Very interesting. Carry on.

Posted 8 Years Ago


MandaBear

8 Years Ago

Thank you for the review I am glad you liked it
I wish I could rate this a million out of a hundred.

Posted 8 Years Ago


MandaBear

8 Years Ago

Thank you! That is so nice to hear! I am glad you liked it so much!!
Crimson Apples

8 Years Ago

No problem! You would definitely deserve it.
MandaBear

8 Years Ago

Thank you that made my day =)

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